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Nepročitano 13-06-12, 16:10   #431
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Zadani Tin i ja

Igračka vjetrova

Pati bez suze, živi bez psovke,
i budi mirno nesretan.
Tašte su suze, a jadikovke
ublažit neće gorki san.

Podaj se pjanom vjetru života,
pa nek te vije bilo kud;
pusti ko listak nek te mota
u ludi polet vihor lud.

Leti ko lišće što vir ga vije,
za let si, dušo stvorena.
Za zemlju nije, za pokoj nije
cvijet što nema korijena. (Tin Ujević)

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Vjetar u igri

O korijenje milo, gdje li si se skrilo?
Zašto šutiš i sve cvjetove mučiš?

Ne vidiš ljepotu, ni ljudsku dobrotu
samo da bi snatrio i dane kratio

onima koji se vole i ustrajno mole
da prežive dan i ožive san.

Vjetar te nađe da te smrt ne snađe
pa miris tvoj raznese, onima koje rese

zavodljivost pojave između sna i jave
umorne noge klecave od crne mećave.

Taj vjetar ludi što me svaku noć budi
samo mimo mene prođe i osama dođe

ostavlja trag, da se ne vratim unatrag.
Vjetre, ne daj me nikom i ne ljubi vikom

nego zastani na mome vratu i ne govori bratu
da je tvoja draga, istog korijenja, ali bez znamenja

Kao i njegova izgubljena latica, tužna je to krilatica. (Naftali)


( eh da......ne može svatko pjesnikom biti,
ali može svoje skromno poetsko gnijezdo sviti.....)


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nisam nikad čula ovu njegovu pjesmu...............


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Zadani Cipele............

Na nozi nova cipelica, sprema se nova smicalica
ljepoti ženske prirode, putovi koji tajnama vode.

Baš je zavodljivo ljupka i godila bi joj topla kupka
da po dnu kade klizi i da je ne prepuštaju brizi

ljeto je obuzima cijelu i dira po svakom dijelu
a ona bijela kao šuma zimi i ne raduje se ovoj klimi

koja crta male zavijutke, od kose njene, crne oblutke.


Cipelice više nisu u modi jer ne trebaju u vodi..........


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Zadani ova pjesma ima da stoji ovdjeeeee.............



ne treba ništa nadodavat' od teksta........


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Zadani voli me, ne voli me, voli me....thanks, remove your thanks, thanks..:)

Ovo su riječi za sve one koji se vole i one nimalo nisu "crne od dubine".
Ne zapliću se, ne dvoje i ne sumnjaju.

One su cvijet najljepši koji zastaje na latici voljenja, mišljenja i zahvaljivanja što je uopće, stvoren da miriše i tamo gdje mirisi ne dopiru.

Bila bih u zabludi kada bih ga prisvojila samo sebi, a ne posvetila i tebi....i tebi.....i tebi tamo što si se skrio iza stabla.........Dođi malo, ovdje ima toplih izvora i vrućih kapljica nepresušnih gejzira......

Ima i housa, hip hopa, Ujevića i dubstepa, pršuta i nogometa, nema Svetih pisama, ni cijelog reda kopiranih srdaca........

Ovdje se veselimo svakojakim drskostima, gorkim pićima i nekim ludim istinama koje se obješaju kao čarape na štriku.......

Ljepota.

Voli me, ne voli me, voli me.......i baš ta je zadnja iščupana latica.
E dok ja pišem, ona će bit zadnja, pa taman anđele oborili sa trona!

Mala...ne daj se zbuniti......nisi samo ti u igri.
Ima ih cijelo jedno selo što pije sa istog izvora!

Sastanu se pa vijećaju o ljubavi.
A ljubav dere sve mekane kože o jednom dodiru!

Ljepota.

Blizu smo, al' daleko kao ponedjeljak i četvrtak.....pa se brojimo i gojimo od svih poruka na zajedničkom stolu.

Nije loše, bar se nekad ugledamo na okrajcima zajedničkog povečerja.

Mala, ne boj se dok je cvijeta u mome peru pisanja i nadanja.....
Bit će uvijek na onome " voli me"...............





p.s. podudarnost sa stvarnim likovima ( a njih je barem 10), slučajna je.
nije pjesma, ali je ona viša od njega.....
kada bi netko i pomislio da je ovo tekst po narudžbi, prevario bi se..jer je svima nama " iz zajedničke zdjele jesti"...i svi smo nekako i isti...i čisti....ha!


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Zadani Djevojka noći...Dobriša Cesarić



Pred ogledalom je zastala. Kao na licu ugljenarovom ogleda se i na njenom licu zanat njen.

Još jedanput povuče kažiprstom preko nacrnjenih obrva, namjesti dlanovima kosu i opipa torbicu.

Ključ je u njoj.

Odilazeći, misli ko će je noćas pohoditi.

Da li kakav čovjek siguran i surov, ili dražesno nespretan dječak, koji povlači ruku pred svakim oštrijim pogledom i moli očima dopuštenje za svaku smjeliju kretnju.

Hoće li ostaviti u njenoj postelji miris parfema, zadah vina, ili ništa do zgnječenih jastuka i tople ponjave, koja će ohladnjeti isto tako brzo kao i on.

Dobriša Cesarić


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Zadani ponjava

Ponjava ali žena runjava na ormariću kupatila britvice dvije od pustih dlaka brkate žene otupile a kriza novčanik panika hvata nema se ni za kavu a kamoli za ponjavu.Oj mužu ja ti prati neću ovu tvoju robu vonjavu sve dok mi ne kupiš ponjavu.Ženo brkata nema novaca u firmi vrište uvati se brušenja britvice.Dam ti ja britvice po glavi ona veli sutra se ručku nikako ne veseli.Oću ponjavu kud puklo da puklo pa makar se ovo malo brkova po podu vuklo.Ajoj ženo u dug me uvuče radije ću tako nego da se brk tvoj po zemlji vuče.


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Zadani moderna žena

moderna žena radi, pa se svojim novcem sladi
za brkove ne treba britvice jer ima flaster za dlakice
pa ih fino i svaki tjedan čupa i pritom ne ostaje ni jedna rupa.

koga briga više za ručak, jaje je ionako, mućak
no, ucjene i dalje pale jer je ljubav ostala samo za budale
koje maštaju o besmrtnosti u ovoj umjetnoj nevidljivosti.

Stare ponjave bodu, sukno isto hoće slobodu
u zatvor ćemo stavit saten, pa nek crkne njen ten
svako jutro u solarij, bit će na kraju običan rezbarij

bore posvuda i duboke, suknje joj postale široke
hoće ona na naslovnicu, izdat kakvu slikovnicu
da povijest o njenom tijelu piše, al' usput i da suze briše.

Zato ženi treba igra, da se makne od tigra
ovoga života koji je prazan i jastuka koji je vlažan
od njenih sanjalačkih suza, njoj treba muza.

Muza jedne sulude umjetnosti koja otkriva umješnosti
njenih prstiju, srca i uma, i tako se makne od svačijeg druma
i živi u svome svijetu i stalno drži dijetu
kako bi bila u stanju siromaštva i nedostatnosti.........................



sve važne stvari događaju se gore..................


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