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Nepročitano 20-02-13, 09:09   #601
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p.s. u nastavku teme, voljela bih da pišemo "samo" svoje riječi......a ne "tuđe"....jer mi smo oni, a oni su mi......splet, baš kao na cvjetnoj livadi.

Ako smo mi oni a oni su mi ... splet-isprepleteni onda se tu više nemože dobro razlikovati između svoje i tuđe rječi jer netko je prije mene možda rekao ono što sam htjela reći...Ili ja to nisam dobro razumjela...
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Ako smo mi oni a oni su mi ... splet-isprepleteni onda se tu više nemože dobro razlikovati između svoje i tuđe rječi jer netko je prije mene možda rekao ono što sam htjela reći...Ili ja to nisam dobro razumjela...
kao pokretač teme, ponekad zaželim da tema ide u određenom smijeru, što naravno, ne znači da tako mora i biti..poštujući pravilo slobode...

Ipak, voljela bih da pišemo više svoje uratke...bilo pjesme, misli, asocijacije na odr. trenutak ili ostanemo šokirani nekom slikom, pjesmom pa napišemo neki svoj utisak, događanje u sebi koje ista pokreće...itd...

To bi bilo zanimljivije i doživljajno uzbudljivije nego da kopiramo i stavljamo uratke tuđih autora...odnosno, da nam to bude prvotni smisao......

No, i kad sami pišemo svoje tekstove, gotovo uvijek, između svih riječi, mogu se nazrijeti ona općeljudska iskustva koja su zasigurno zapisana već prije.....ali, naša su ipak naša jer kroz njih govorimo o općoj istini na osobni način....

Igra čovjeka, teško da može biti završena......

Istina, i sama znam staviti neku lijepu pjesmu kojoj nisam autor ili tekst, ali nekako sam zamislila ovu temu da to ne bude temeljni smisao.......

Dajmo si slobodu pisanja, inspiracije i duha....koliko god želimo...uostalom, mi ju i "imamo"........

Cvjete, lijepi ti pozdrav!


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Ako smo mi oni a oni su mi ... splet-isprepleteni onda se tu više nemože dobro razlikovati između svoje i tuđe rječi jer netko je prije mene možda rekao ono što sam htjela reći...Ili ja to nisam dobro razumjela...
isključiš sve utjecaje.....ma samo pokušaj i budi svoj......!

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San

Zamislila sam svjet
u kojem smjeh bi vladao
i nitko ne bi stradao
zbog nerazumjevanja...

Zamislila sam život
u kojem čovjek čovjeka voli...
i nikoga ne boli
različitost.

Shvatila sam- da to moj je san...
jasno je ko dan,
još se nismo probudili
da bi san ostvarili...

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..izgledaš gordo i smjelo
kao vrh planinskoga lanca, bezimenog
stršeći u san bez kraja
ondašnje nade
u pobjedu.

O zemljo, svemira mojega....
Uzmi (moje) svitanje i daj ga onome tko ga ne želi primiti,
da se razbije u komadiće čari
što se saplesti moraju
zauvijek.

Pa nek' plače čvor nad linijom života.....................


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Zadani maline sa šlagom......

U svim našim pričama, ostala je misao, zaboravljena i meka....
Baš kao sramežljivo lice, pogleda uprtog u nožne prste.
Jednom će opet, oživjeti.................



na onom okupljalištu snova.....znaš gdje......


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Zadani Mir...

se ušulja, neprimjetno kao voda koja prođe niz svaku klet, pa se zazrcali duša u duši drugoga.
Promjena preplavi srce kad promjenu ni ne želiš, pa se začudiš sebi.....u svim vremenima.

Tiho.....o tiho govori jutro....kako smo životni kad nema zraka i kad sva lutanja zauzmu položaj borbenosti.

Dođe čovjeku da sjedne u sebe od toliko ljepote.


Nekad su čučali svi strahovi, sada je sunce.Onima koji misle da su u mraku.
I nema studeni kojoj se zub smekšati ne može, nema oka u kojem plače narav bezutješno, da mu vječne utjehe nema.

Moćna je Riječ istine kojoj priliku damo......da sjedne i ona s nama, u nama.

Pa da okus kave u susretu, nikad ne zaboravimo..

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Bilo je to ovog proljeća, možda čak i prošlogodišnjeg ljeta, ne sjećam se točno, znam samo da je bio lijep, prozračan dan, okupan suncem. Išao sam po užinu, brzo, prebrzo poput vjetra, kako i inače svakodnevno činim jer sam iza sebe ostavio hrpu neriješenih problema, nekoliko korisnika na čekanju, par ugovorenih termina za intervencije i instalacije SW-a na računalima,...

Ah da, trebam svakodnevno zaraditi sebi dnevnicu i (mrskom stranjskom) vlasniku još jednu, možda dvije, "možda pet, možda sto, ne znam broj, al' znam da bit' ću tvoj..." Pjevušeći u sebi taj prastari hit Dugmića, projurio sam svojom uobičajenom rutom, kraj pravoslavne crkve (ureda), uz druge male dućane pa sve do pekarnice, mog krajnjeg odredišta.

No, na ovaj Dan Gospodnji, uobičajena, svakodnevna slika iz "cash-a" razlikovala se u gordom, ali ujedno i očajnom prizoru u vidu jedne vrlo mlade dugokose žene koja tek što je navršila dvadesetu...

U prolazu, zagledan u nebesko plavetnilo, krajičkom oka zapazio sam ispruženu ruku koja moli, samo za tren spustio sam pogled s visina na jedne ogromne, tužne i uplašene oči, baš poput srne koja se našla u stupici:
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Te oči pogodile su me izravno i nemilosrdno poput biča, sve je stalo i jedino čega sam bio svjestan jest taj tužni i očajni pogled zarobljene srne koja preklinje pomoć.

Trajalo je to trenutak vječnosti i moje se tijelo nastavilo kretati prema zacrtanom odredištu. Brzo sam kupio užinu i sav uzvraćeni novac nisam spremio u novčarku kako uobičajeno činim već sam ga zadržao u dlanu, sada dobrano oznojenom. Požurio sam se do mlade žene nadajući se da nije otišla. Još izdaleka vidio sam njen lijepi zaobljeni trbuh koji je kratka "kaki" majica jedva prekrivala.

Iznebuha, pojavi se sluškinja kneza tame u vidu izblajhanog bapca od preko 70 godina, otprilike. Vidio sam tu sijedu glavu i tanke, ljutite usne koje su se micale u vrlo brzom ritmu:

"Kako te nije stid prositi, što radiš ovdje, odlazi kući, tko ti je "to" napravio, gdje je on, neka se on brine za "to"..."

Mlada žena stoički je podnosila uvrede, mirno držeći ispruženu ruku u čijoj se školjci naziralo samo par kovanica. Vidjelo se da joj je teško, ali novi život koji je nosila ispod srca davao joj je neslućenu snagu i nije se pomaknula ni za milimetar, prkosno gledajući u neku zamišljenu točku u daljini.

U trenu sam stao u središte te, dijelom i groteskne životne situacije. Bez riječi spustio sam novac u ispruženu, molećivu ruku. Krupne, uplašene oči kao u srne u čijim se krajevima zrcalila mala, izdajnička kapljica suze, zahvalno su se susrele s mojim uznemirenim pogledom. Krišom, poput sjene, izgubio sam se u užurbanoj gradskoj vrevi, u tom danu okupanom suncem, mom gradu koji vječno negdje plovi, "na Zemlji koja se u zvijezde računa"...

Nije (meni) prošlo puno vremena, ali možda i jest (mladoj trudnici), vratio sam se pred vrata crkve. No, nigdje više nije bilo mlade, plavokose žene koja nosi čedo pod srcem, a niti mršave, koštunjičave sjedokose starice tankih, beživotnih usana.

Samo bezlične sjenke ljudi koji odlaze negdje u beskraj...

U zraku je ostala lebdjeti čudna mješavina čarolije novog života i zadah truleži nadolazeće smrti izboranog tijela...



"...U životu treba mudro da šutiš
Al' riječ ako rekneš
Neka bude teška kao svaka
ISTINA
Neka bude rečena za
Čovjeka..."



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Neka bude teška kao svaka
ISTINA
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Zadani Naftalijeva oporuka

Ratniče
Sretoh te kraj Hasora
Početak da mi zaoštriš kroz pogled
U osami, pored majke sluškinje
Plemenitoga roda, nadodanog’.

Četvoricu sinova
Izgubih, podno brda bezimenog
Ostadoše Riječi visjeti nad sudbinom
U šutnji nedorečene čežnje
Biti košutom Sjevera.

Jahseelu
, oči
Kad probodeš mudrošću,
Kaži mu da jednom bar, udahne
I mirisom čovještva pogleda
Moj usud.

Guni
Sapleti vijenac od nade satkan
Smislom zaodjeni srce njegovo
Pa ga ostavi u sumnji
O igrama života.

Šutljivi Jeser
Neka je gizdav kao otac svoj
Al’ podaj mu misao o strpljivosti
Da se ne bi grobom svojim okitio
Na dan Strašni.

Šilemu
Operi opačinu mladosti
Srce da mu dotakne nebo
Tek će onda, zavoljeti siroticu
Poviješću, zametenog pogleda.

Ratniče

Ti, što svijet dlanom dragaš
Sjeti me se o povratku.
Prepoznat ćeš me po oceanima
U skutima pozlaćene Duše.

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